Sin Kids by Daylen Newton

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Sin Kids by Daylen Newton

Post by Dim_Jimbo on Mon Jun 12, 2017 11:05 pm

I hit the character limit for the post sadly so I decided to just make a ready to read version on docs. Of course I'll move it to something better eventually and it still needs some editing also. But here it is. Enjoy! https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IkejtIVp6FL0aVrWdn7D1n5mcfnvXY8pxRjpEID-Fls/edit?usp=sharing


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Re: Sin Kids by Daylen Newton

Post by Dim_Jimbo on Mon Jun 12, 2017 11:14 pm

I've finally posted the current versions of sins kids. Enjoy what I've written and feedback on how to improve the story such and dialogue, grammar, how to progress/transition from one part of the story to another such as the gang going from lunch to The Blue Monday. I'll be updating it once I feel like the current part I'm going to add to this is satisfying to me. Enjoy and stay tuned!

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